Defining the system data model early on will clarify how data will flow among different components of the system. Also you could draw an ER diagram using the diagramming tool to enhance your design...
You should identify enough components that are needed to solve the actual problem from end to end. Also remember to draw a block diagram using the diagramming tool to augment your design. If you are unfamiliar with the tool, you can simply describe your design to the chat bot and ask it to generate a starter diagram for you to modify...
Explain how the request flows from end to end in your high level design. Also you could draw a sequence diagram using the diagramming tool to enhance your explanation...
We will using Load Balancer to allow horizontal scaling for proxy server. Url should be hashed to get the shorten one. We could use Redis as cache to get the original URL fast. We should pushing analytics event instead of asynchronous request to loosely couple analytics system with this one.
What are some future improvements you would make? How would you mitigate the failure scenario(s) you described above?